so cnn had this story on the air about a fourteen-year-old dalmatian that got stuck in a storm drain underground for four days; concerned friends and family eventually rescued him.
i went to the web to find an article of this happy-ending story that i could forward to my wife and her sister (both ardent dog lovers)
and this.... this is the first article i find:
KLTV in Tyler - proofread what you put on your website
8/21/07 Wayne County , West Virginia
Dog Buried Alive Trapped Four Days Underground
Dog trapped underground in a storm drain for four days has been rescued.
Listen carefully, and you'll hear a grown man cry: Tears of triumph over tragedy. Finding his buried dog: alive.
This is a story of sheer perseverance! It could have had a completely different ending. The threat of a cave in, after heavy rain, was very real!
Alex the Dalmation was trapped 15 feet underground in an old storm drain. He crawled in to cool offand got stuck.
A danger, not only to the trapped dog, but it's owner: who had been digging for days to try and free Alex. A friend with a backhoe came to help, inching dangerously close. It's giant, iron claw capable of ripping the animal in half. A hole large enough to swallow this ladder whole and everyone and everything in it.
That was the thing we had to whisper a little prayer for last night, because these dogs get to be like part of the family.
But after 4 days of searching and two days of digging, Alex, was free.
For 14 years he has bee a part of Thompson family.
Alex was taken to the vet, early this afternoon: he arrived on a stretcher. iI's a miracle.
a veritable minefield of:
- exclamation points! !! !
- colons and commas dispersed on a seemingly random basis
- fragment sentences that start almost in mid-thought and end jarringly abrupt
- apostrophes where no apostrophe should be
- missing letters and misspelled words
it's so bad, it's almost poetic. brave, brave doggy.